- app 8/10/2019 12:00:00 AM by dzkras
I will give 6 points,becouse in 9 and 3/4 it a good story, but the final is a $%^##$
- A nice story 12/25/2019 12:00:00 AM by jelinafck
It is a nice story, I really dig the storyline, but there are some of the steps that just needs that little extra. Overall I like it tho!
- Family First 12/3/2019 12:00:00 AM by mikahlurimaah
For me this story is a bit slow and less use of the dough compared to other dough stories. so I suggest heading the story with the storyline so that the audience is more excited to see it